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pewter
leaf softly rests
patient transformation
in silent soil
becoming less
and more
merging
slow slower still
one form lost another
ripens hidden
restoration
death life
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pewter
leaf in soft repose
transformation slow
in silent soil
becoming
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ReplyDelete"becoming less and more" is exactly what happens when you work with such tight forms as cinquain and haiku. or at least that's what i think. :) these are lovely!
I love both poetry forms ~ Pewter word has been lingering in my head, but paired with your leaf picture, the verses are stunning ~
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday ~
thank you for sharing such beauty in word and image; you make the world a better place for so many, laura.
ReplyDeleteLovely words and pics. Enjoyed them.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the second rendition of this poem. Slight, with might!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful pictures and beautiful words!
ReplyDeleteThe pewter leaf is a wonderful point of departure for both pieces - I liked the longer one best.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Laura....Michelle
ReplyDeleteGreat combination..esp. 'pewter'
ReplyDeleteI love all of your words, the dance of guidance by the leaf's fragile view!
ReplyDeleteWonderful Laura...
I want to try this form again~
I'm sorry about Nefesh
I believe both of your poems speak strongly of the cycle of life...of death and rebirth. I so look forward to your poetry and photos each Sunday, Laura.
ReplyDeleteThe pewter leaf and its journey to becoming...not something less...but something more...your poem is a beautiful tribute to the circle of life.Joy Ride
ReplyDeleteA reverent reverie for all life, even in death.
ReplyDeleteI love your work Laura--these speak so strongly of continued transformation --I have been off singing for much of January so I am unaware of what has transpired with your pet, but I hope all is well with all of you--
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The pewter leaf is so beautiful, and the double cinquain is lovely. I'm sorry about your cat. Hugs.
ReplyDeleteNice work Laura! My favorite is the first one.
ReplyDeleteI like all the different textures.
ReplyDeleteYou always have the perfect verse for your photos. I love the photo but it really becomes special with your verses. I have to say the haiku one is my favorite but not by far!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful light and color, delicious photo, a piece very poetic.
ReplyDeleteLovely poetry Laura and I'm also awed by your ability to see beauty (and poetry) in a fallen leaf...
ReplyDeleteI'm a coward when it comes to writing in form. You do it well. I love the picture. Don't know that I've ever really seen a silver leaf, except a fake one.
ReplyDeleteLovely post Laura xx
ReplyDeleteSo pretty this reminds me of lambs ear soft and bristly at the same time.
ReplyDeleteBecoming less and more...that is beautiful..Love your photos and words. They are a delicate expression of the circle of life.
ReplyDeleteThe pewter leaf ... beautiful !!!
ReplyDeleteYou've obviously had a fine education, and made the most of it. You're very talented.
ReplyDeleteThe word 'pewter' is so exactly right for this poem.
ReplyDeleteSuch a magical pewter leaf.
ReplyDeletelovely pics and words!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful very nice compositions!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful images Laura
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